Monday, September 15, 2014




Kaitlyn Chow                                                                             September 15, 2014
                  

Reading Response

Mia is a seventeen year old girl who carries the love of music. She was caught in a very tragic car   accident, and is now the only survivor in what was her used to be family of four. This accident brings Adam, her boyfriend, and Kim her best friend, to come closer as they work together to have hope for Mia. Before this accident, they didn't know much about each other, just who they were and that was it. Mia desperately tried  to bond them by force; however, she gave up on them because they insisted that they just didn't 'click' with each other. Throughout the story, Kim and Adam have seemed to bond together, realizing that their friend might not survive this battle.
One example that shows why Mia's condition brings Adam and Kim closer is because when her relatives found out about the accident, they came rushing to the hospital. Kim came as well and, realizing that Adam was missing, went out to go find him. She knew that Adam was really close to Mia, and he needed to be aware of the situation. Mia, knowing that Kim, went out to look for Adam in the club he played in with his band, and went through all that trouble to get him, was very appreciative. For example Mia said, "It was Kim who must have braved any number of bouncers to find Adam. And Kim who must've braved telling Adam....And now, because of her, he was here." This shows the understanding that Kim had of Adam needing to know about this, and about Mia needing Adam there.
In addition to that, there is yet more evidence of Kim and Adam starting to bond and look out for each other, like when Adam and Kim tried to go in and visit Mia, who was in a coma in the ICU center and the nurse says, "I'm sorry, visitations are restricted to immediate family only." At this, Adam goes slump, almost falling to the floor. However, Kim is there, to catch him, to support him. Then she also takes her part in persuading the nurse to let them in, although it doesn't help the cause because they are still not allowed to go visit Mia. Notice how Kim caught Adam; she knew that he felt so defeated, and even if she did too, she was trying her best to tolerate both of their despair. As Mia described Kim, "Adam has about a foot and fifty pounds on Kim, but after stumbling for a second, she adjusts to the burden. She bears it." Kim would be there for Adam now, and she knows how hard it is, but she can bear it.
Lastly, Kim and Adam work together a plan that would get them into the ICU to see Mia. So, they work together to distract the nurses and break into Mia's room. They hide in a supply closet, gathering ideas that might help them get in. They did argue, but they still considered what each of them had to say. And when they needed a light to see in the dark closet, Kim, being the resourceful person that she is, "pulled out the cell phone her mom gave her...and a square light softens the darkness. "Now, thats more like the brilliant girl Mia brags about," Adam says." This shows us that Adam and Kim are on good terms and working together so they can see Mia, cause they both need her.
Although Adam and Kim had no interest in knowing each other in the beginning of the book, seeing Mia in that condition brought them closer to each other as they supported one another. They were both close to Mia, and it was hard to accept what happened to Mia and her family. However, they didn't accept the fact that Mia was in a coma, and that she was the only one out of her brother and parents to survive the dreadful car crash. Yet, Adam and Kim managed to encourage each other and try to stay positive; doing more than they'd ever said or done to each other before.






2 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed how you were able to explain your thoughts. Your response was easy to understand, yet had beautiful evidence. Also i really liked how you really analyzed key points, not just by elaborating why,but why were things important. Great job!

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  2. This was really amazing because youre elaboration was "on point" and i love how you gave evidence to support your claim. Good job!!!!

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