Thursday, December 11, 2014

Kaitlyn Chow

Argument Essay
Rough Draft

         There is many arguments on whether or not the book Looking For Alaska should be banned or not because of it’s inappropriate content. Looking For Alaska is about a boy named Miles Halter who starts high school at a boarding school named Culver Creek. He starts out to be a very innocent, very naive boy. However, as the book progresses, he starts to change by breaking rules with his friends, doing things such as smoking and drinking on campus, setting up multiple pranks and breaking into dorm rooms. This content has caused many questions for students, teachers and schools to decipher whether or not this content is appropriate for young adults. Looking For Alaska by John Green should be removed from middle school libraries because it contains many inappropriate issues and influences young adult readers with them.

         Many would like to ban the book Looking For Alaska because of the content in the book. For example, in the article “Banned Books Awareness: Looking For Alaska” a parent protested that it “went against what she was trying to teacher her child.” It was banned shortly after as pornography in Knox County, Tennessee. In Tennessee, Looking For Alaska banned the book from class reading lists as well, claiming that it was “too racy.” It might be considered racy because of it’s sexual content and bad behaviors as well. An example in the book was on page 126, when Miles and Lara are alone and Miles gets a “blow job.” It was mentioned in the article, “Tennessee School District Bans Novel Over Teen Sex Scene,” when a district in Tennessee said that, “two pages in particular were graphic enough in sexual description that we felt it wasn’t appropriate.” This particular scene included using words like “penis” and depicted a clear image in the readers mind of the “blow job.” A big part of why many would also ban this book is because it make the reader feel uncomfortable with it’s content. Readers want to read something that takes them into another world, but not make them feel insecure or uncomfortable.

         The content in this book was also not appropriate for young adults readers, as many claim. Looking for Alaska has been “challenged for sexual content, explicit language and characters consumption of alcohol.” A specific example is on page 94, “Alaska went in alone I walked out the door five minutes later . . . three cartons of cigarettes, five bottles of wine and a fifth of vodka.” As you can see here, they consume lots of alcohol in this book, not to mention the fact that they are all under the age of twenty-one. In addition, this book also “appears on the American Library Association's list and the most frequently challenged books in 2012.”  This book shows many bad influences that is not appropriate for young adult readers.

         Although, it is also argued that Looking For Alaska should not be banned. Parents objecting the prohibition of this book say that the book, “isn’t pornographic in even the broadest sense of the term as the most objectionable word used in the realistically-rendered sex passage is “penis.” This word however, is hardly used in any young adult books because most authors know that there would be a lot of controversy over the use of that word. In addition, the word was used in sexual context, not by describing a part of a human body. Therefore I argue that this is pornography. To further explain why this book should not be banned, John Green, the author himself, made a video in response to all the controversy between the book being banned. He said, “I am extremely grateful to all the teachers and librarians . . .who understand that I am not out to corrupt teenagers, and who further understand the importance of reading books critically and thoughtfully as a whole, rather than focusing on individual scenes ripped from their context.”  How exactly though, are the scenes in this book being “ripped from their content?” John Green wrote those particular scenes of sex, drinking, smoking, pranking, hazing and stealing on purpose. Not in a way to teach however, because it influences readers more than it would prevent young adult readers to do these things.


            And so we have it, Looking for Alaska should be banned because of these inappropriate issues in the book. You have seen the many scenes where there are words in the book that aren’t for young adults, bad influences on the readers. There is cursing, hazing, underage drinking and stealing. So many things that are frowned upon by many, they are in this book. It should be banned because of the way that John Green writes about it, and makes the characters not care about their behaviors, and that they don’t think it’s wrong.

Tuesday, December 2, 2014

Kaitlyn Chow
812


The Story Behind It
Continued from #5

         I wrote this piece out of the top of my head. It was my best idea, and I know that peer pressure drinking goes occurs often. So I wanted to give the reader an actual scenario where it happened, I wanted the reader to feel like they were there,watching it with their own eyes. Peer pressure drinking is hard, because a lot of people don’t want to drink, but with an audience in front of you, you also don’t want to chicken out. It’s a very big social issue around the world, and is also something that needs to be stopped.


         I choose the main character, Doug to be alone so that it would be four people against one. So that Doug actually felt pressured to drink. I also wrote the thoughts that were going through his head when Katrina thrusts the bottle into his hand. I wanted the reader to understand what people face when they have the bottle and everyone is looking at you, expecting you to drink it. I also made the character seem strong, but inside, he was very vulnerable. I did this to show that what he was saying was so different from what he was actually feeling. Someone may act like something isn’t a big deal but inside they really want to disappear.
Kaitlyn Chow                                                                                  
ELA-Writing Project For Social Awareness                                                             

Short Dramatic Scene
#5

         I'm standing outside leaning against the cool brick building getting some air when a red range rover comes into view. The truck comes to a stop in front of me as three familiar faces get out of the car. My fellow classmates from West High. I catch a whiff of smoke as they walk towards me.

         "Yo Doug, I got that good stuff right here." Jeff says, holding up two huge bottles of alcohol like they are his prized trophies.

         "Yeah man. Take some. We'll give it to you no charge." Bruce says with a lit cigarette in hand.

         "I can't, I, um, I have this important job interview in the morning. Can't get hung over tonight." I say. My voice trembled a bit. I hope they didn't notice. I’ve never drank before.

         Katrina laughs. "You’re cute, Doug. A couple of swigs won't do nothing. You'll realize it when you try some. Don't sweat it." She says, taking a bottle from Jeff and opening it. She takes a long gulp and offers it to me. "C'mon Doug, I know you can take it."

         I can't take it. I know I can't. I'm not gonna do it.

         "Don't even think about it bro. This ain't even the real hard stuff, Doug." Bruce says, abandoning his cigarette to the ground and leaning on the hood of a car.

         "I told you, I have this important interview tomorrow. I can't screw it up." I start walking away. I don't even know where I'm going. Anywhere but here.

         "You won't screw anything up bro." Jeff says, catching up with me. He grabs the hem of my hoodie rather aggressively.

         I stop walking. I’m too scared to move.

         "Drink." Katrina says, thrusting the bottle into my hands.

         I look around. Tension is in the air. Bruce stands up, like he’s ready for a fight.

         If I don't drink, they're going to do something bad to me. I don't want to find out what that is. So I drink.

         "Atta boy. It's not so bad now is it?" Jeff says. Or screams. I'm not sure which because the world is spinning.

         "Try this bottle. I like it better." Bruce says, taking it from Jeff and giving me the other.
        

         But I can't tell if I'm holding it because I'm having trouble seeing. Tears are streaming down my face and my throat has gone raw. I drop the bottle and run, blindly.
Kaitlyn Chow
812

Excerpt from: Crackback by John Coy
Social Issue: Steroids

        
         “I don’t know, Zach.”

         “Tyson’s taking ‘em. Lots of seniors. Gives you that edge.”

         I stare at the capsules. I’ve never taken anything for edge. I get out and shove them in my pocket.

         “Take the Blast before the game,” Zach says. “Be ready to kill ‘em.”

         “I’ll be ready.” I slap my hand on the door.


Reading Response
#4

         This is an example of peer pressure to taking steroids. As a football player, Miles wants to get ripped. He wants to be able to lift heavy weights and take down guys like they’re nothing. So Miles’ best friend Zach offers him Rip Blast, says that most of the team is taking them. And Miles isn’t sure because he hasn’t done any type of drugs before. Throughout the book, Zach encourages him about taking the pills, and he thinks that Miles takes it on a daily basis. However, Miles only took it once. Only because he was peer pressured and Zach was sitting right next to him, watching him.


         My thoughts on peer pressure are that we need to bring awareness to this because it’s something that is very hard to control. You can’t control people ganging up on a kid in the middle of the night, but you can encourage self-esteem. The people that get peer pressured go out of their way to do what others want because they either don’t want to get hurt, want to impress others or feel like it’ll turn out to be good for them. Unfortunately, that’s not true, you should do what you want to do, feel what you want to feel and believe what you want to believe, don’t let others do that for you. They aren’t to decide for you.



         I think that the message of this was to act and write out scenes that can actually happen inreal life, and being pressured to do something because your friend(s) are doing it happens a lot. In this case, Miles’ best friend has already started to take these steroids and expects Miles to as well because they’re best friends and they usually do everything together. However, Miles knows that steroids are drugs, and he isn’t sure about this. I think that it’s regular to feel that way. Miles knew that Zach and him were best friends and they don’t keep secrets from each other, but on this one, he didn’t want Zach to judge him for not taking the pills for football. Personally, I think that you should not do any type of drugs because in the end, they always end up negatively affecting you. It’s not good for your body or mind. No matter what it can do or make you feel.